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06 July 2007 @ 06:38 pm
Being A Donaghy [30 Rock; Jack/Liz]  
TITLE: Being A Donaghy
CHAPTER 24: After All
FANDOM: 30 Rock
SPOILERS: Through "Corporate Crush"


"Lemon! Liz, darling..."

Liz glanced up from her laptop to see her husband coming through the door of her office, grinning a mile wide and holding two bottles of what was most likely champagne. She grinned right back at him. She kinda couldn't help it -- when he grinned like that, it was downright infectious. "Root beer float?" she questioned, indicating his giddy state.

"No," he smiled back, much like he had a year ago when he was excited about contract negotiation. "I just got word from Geiss... I've been doing such a fantastic job -- and by 'fantastic job,' I mean there haven't been any firework catastrophes..."

She nodded. "Which is always good..."

"Yes! I received word that they're promoting me. Again! I'm now Vice President of East Coast Television, Microwave Oven, and Toaster Oven Programming!"

Her eyebrows flew up. "Wow, Jack. That's... great?"

Jack swooped down excitedly to give her a kiss. "And it's all because of you!" He took a seat on the corner of her desk, one foot still planted on the floor while the other dangled over the edge of the desk. He leaned toward her slightly. "What would I do without you?"

Liz smirked and twitched her brows upward momentarily, turning back to her laptop. "Well, you'd have to learn how to program the Season Pass function on TiVo all by yourself."

"Oh, Lemon." He grasped her hand and pulled her gently to her feet, closing his hands around her hips and bringing her close. "Look at us. Happily married, loving life..." He tilted his head and cast his eyes to her hair. "Minimal amounts of food in our hair..."

Liz rolled her eyes and casually draped her forearms over his shoulders. "Yes, yes, yes." When she was finished rolling her eyes melodramatically, she caught Jack grinning at her. Her eyes widened. "What?"

"It looks good on you."

Liz glanced down at her outfit briefly -- a simple blue empire-waisted dress. He'd seen her in it a thousand times. What the hell was he talking about? "What does?"

"Marriage. Everything." He slid his hand across her stomach and grinned devilishly when she jumped away and batted at his hand.

"Will you stop that already? You're obsessed."

"I can't help it."

"Well, try to," she chuckled, shaking her head at him.

It had been three months since she'd ripped up the annulment papers; three months since she finally admitted to herself that -- as insane as Jack made her -- she couldn't help but love him. And it hadn't been easy, letting Jack in. She'd been "single and pretending to be happy about it" (in his words) for so long. And despite her sporadic relationships, she'd never experienced what this was -- a partnership, in pretty much every sense of the word.

Jack still drove her insane. And she still baffled him with some of her highly-unfeminine ways, but in a weird way... it worked. Perfectly. Maybe a little too perfectly. Liz had been waiting for the other shoe to drop for three months, but... nothing yet.

Jack kissed her again and she kissed back, laying her palms over his face as he slid his hands over her waist, brushing her stomach along the way. She figured no matter what, he'd never tire of touching her stomach. It was weird... but kinda sweet.

"I figured we could have a drink to celebrate."

"Jack, it's ten-thirty in the morning. And you know that I--"

He held up one of the two bottles. "I brought sparkling pear juice for you."

Her eyes lit up. "Oooh, okay."

Jack pulled two champagne flutes out of one of the inside pockets of his suit jacket, and Liz shook her head at him, chuckling while he poured one glass of champagne and one of sparkling pear juice. He handed her the juice and raised his champagne glass, toasting, "To me."

Liz laughed and rolled her eyes, but clinked her glass against his nonetheless. "Yes, to you." She leaned in for a kiss and let him wrap his arm around her waist, pulling her against him. "Congratulations."

It was at that moment that Jenna and Pete came in, arguing about yet another sketch and effectively breaking Jack and Liz out of their embrace. "Liz, tell Pete that I don't want to be Paris Hilton again! I'm getting typecast."

Pete rolled his eyes melodramatically and gestured to Jenna. "Liz, tell Jenna that she's the only blonde on the show, so we really don't have much of a choice! Josh as Paris Hilton would be ugly as hell."

"I don't wanna wear the nose!" Jenna stomped her foot childishly.

Then, at the same time, both seemed to notice that Jack was in the room. "Oh! Hi, Jack." Jenna smiled brightly, while Pete nodded a greeting.

"Good morning." Jack rose to his feet and took another sip of his champagne. He gestured, with the hand that held his glass, between Jenna and Pete as he asked them, "What's this scuffle all about?"

"Oh! Nothing," Jenna dismissed the argument with a flick of her wrist. "I'll do the sketch, it's fine. And I'll wear the nose."

Jack nodded slowly, narrowing his eyes in the manner so unique to him. "Good."

Then, Jenna's eyes went to the bottles on the desk. "Whoa, what are those for? Can I have some? Liz, what are you having?"

Liz held up her glass after taking another healthy sip. "I've got sparkling pear juice, and Jack's got champagne. You guys can have some, right Jack?"

"Absolutely." He nodded to Pete. "Would you go grab some styrofoam cups from the writer's room, Pete?"

"Sure thing." Pete returned seconds later with two cups, which Jack filled with champagne for him and Jenna.

"Why aren't you having champagne?" Jenna enquired of her friend, a teasing lilt to her voice. "Are you pregnant?"

Liz rolled her eyes. Another thing she had to get used to over the past three months -- Jenna needling her endlessly about when she and Jack were going to "start making little Jack-and-Liz babies, because time's running out, Liz."

She sighed and reminded her friend, "It's ten-thirty in the morning."

Jenna rolled her eyes in return. "Oh, whatever. It's not like we operate heavy machinery or anything," she giggled, taking a gulp of champagne. She raised her glass to Liz. "Drink, you freak!"

Jack held up his hand to calm the overzealous blonde. "Liz does not want any alcohol this early in the morning, Jenna. But feel free to drink as much as you'd like. We're celebrating my promotion."

Pete raised his eyebrows and took a drink of his own champagne, shoving his other hand in his pocket and rocking back and forth on his feet momentarily. "Really? Congratulations. What did you get promoted to?"

"They've put me in charge of Toaster Ovens now, as well. I'm thrilled."

Pete nodded and looked slightly confused, especially since Jack still looked stoic as always.

Liz nodded and pointed at her husband while taking another sip. "He really is. This is him being ecstatic. You should see him when he has a root beer float."

"O...kay. I think I should get back to writing now. Jenna?"

"What? Can't I stay? It's not like they're going to have sex in here as soon as we leave!" She eyed Jack and Liz, grimacing. "Right?" She pointed at her best friend and squinted, scrutinizing. "I still think you're pregnant. I mean... who drinks sparkling pear juice in the middle of the morning when there's champagne around?"

Liz and Pete exchanged a look, and Pete nodded and started guiding Jenna to the door while Liz answered, "People who are not alcoholics. Goodbye, Jenna." She smirked at Pete. "Bye, Pete."

Pete winked, and they were out the door.

Liz sighed and shook her head at the closed door, then went back over to her husband, behind her desk. "Sorry."

"You're always apologizing for Jenna, Liz. I enjoy her. I would've fired her a year ago if I didn't."

"Oh. Well..." She wrinkled her nose. "Uh, thanks?"

Jack nodded. "Of course, Lemon. Of course." He glanced surreptitiously over his shoulder, checking for prying ears, before he turned back to his wife with a barely-there grin. "They don't know?"

Liz drained the last few drops of pear juice from her glass and gestured to the door with it when she was done. "Pete does."

"Not Jenna?"

"No!" She shook her head vehemently. "Are you kidding? She's been bugging me since I got back from Hawaii." She rolled her eyes exhaustedly. "It would make her way too happy. Plus, Pete can actually keep a secret. With Jenna, it'd be all over 30 Rock." She tilted her head and shrugged facially, adding, "Possibly on Entertainment Tonight."

"Ah." Jack nodded and pulled her against him again, kissing her briefly before releasing her. He took the bottles and empty glasses with him, and addressed her over his shoulder on the way out. "When were you planning on telling her?"

Liz took a seat and opened her laptop again, waving dismissively and wrinkling her nose. "Meh, I figure... maybe in a few more months."

Jack paused with his hand on the doorknob, eyebrows raised. "A few more months, Lemon, and your abdomen will be roughly the size of a bowling ball. You're already starting to show."

"Yeah, and Jenna hasn't noticed. What will a few more months do?"

Jack chuckled. "Fair enough," he rasped, and waved at her on his way out, calling, "See you at home then, Lemon!"

"Yep," she called back, and found herself smiling at her computer screen as she echoed softly, "See you at home."

In just a year, she'd gone from being the disgruntled protege of Jack Donaghy, to his friend, to his partner, to his fake fiancee, to his fake wife, to his real wife, and... in his words... the "completely unintentional love of his life." And in just another six-and-a-half months, she would be the mother of his first child.

She smiled down at her wedding ring and twisted it on her finger. Life had moved at warp speed for her over the past several months, but... Liz was starting to like that feeling.

Being a Donaghy wasn't so bad after all.


{x-posted to 30_rock and jack_liz}
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a.: J/L; this is easy as lovers go;regalish on July 8th, 2007 03:53 pm (UTC)
Hehehehe! Glad you enjoyed it! And don't worry, I'll have plenty more for you to read soon ;D
Tally: It's Lovelymusical_junkie on July 6th, 2007 11:54 pm (UTC)
Awesome ending. Yay for Jack and his toaster ovens!
A great ending to an AWESOME fic!
Now I'm thinking there needs to be some kind of follow up with the baby. I don't think I've seen any fics with little Lemon-Donaghys running around. Hehe.
I look forward to reading your other fics.
a.: J/L; we're accidentally in love;regalish on July 8th, 2007 03:54 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much! I'm so thrilled you liked the ending; and you know, I just might have to consider a sequel, because the idea of Jack running around with a baby is completely delightful. Hehe!

Thanks again for sticking with this super-long fic and leaving a review every single time! It's kept up my inspiration to write more and more chapters, so for that I am very grateful! :D
amazin'jolovessean on July 7th, 2007 12:12 am (UTC)
well, that was just to perfect for words. i was hoping that would happen, haha! again, thanks so much for this, its been amazing!!
a.: L; i wish you'd take a walkregalish on July 8th, 2007 03:55 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you! Hehe, I'm glad I didn't disappoint ;)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It's been an absolute blast for me to get everyone's reactions on everything as I went along -- and it inspired more and more chapters!

More of Jack & Liz to come! :D
(Anonymous) on July 7th, 2007 12:29 am (UTC)
A sweet happy ending and Jack-and-Liz babies , who can ask more?.Beautiful story, I enjoy very much to read it,thanks.
a.: ED; and i could be your favorite girl;regalish on July 8th, 2007 03:56 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you so much! :D
Uther Pendragon's Loyal Wench: jack and liz blacktiefirthgal on July 7th, 2007 12:36 am (UTC)
Awwww, what an adoarbly sweet ending! I love how Jack was obsessed with touching her belly, so cute! And that last line was so utterly perfect! Loved it! This entire story was absolutely brilliant, and I really wish something like this would actually happen on the show, but sadly I doubt it ever would. Oh well, that's what fanfic is for! I think the most we can hope for on the show is that in the very last episode they'll just throw a hint in that they might end up together and just leave it up to the viewers. I'm hoping that we atleast get a Jack/Liz kiss at some point in the show, even if it ends up being awkward. Anyway, I'm just babbling now! This fic was excellent in every single chapter and I adored how you made them your own characters while still keeping them just like they are on the show (if that makes any sense). Absolutely brilliant, can't wait for your next fic!
a.: L; i learned the truth at seventeen;regalish on July 8th, 2007 04:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you so so so so much!! You have been one of my absolute fave reviewers (I know I shouldn't pick faves, but heee!); you've always left such wonderful insights and encouragements -- you were really one of the main driving forces behind future chapters. And honestly, I didn't mean to make this fic so long, hahaha! After somewhere around chapter 8 or 9, it just kinda gained a mind of its own.

You have been just awesome, and I'm so grateful for all the nice words. I really enjoyed making Jack and Liz my own, while still trying to keep them as true to themselves (or as true to what we know of them, I should say) as possible.

More Jack and Liz fics are on their way (I think I've got 3 going simultaneously right now, hehe)! ♥
imaclanni on July 7th, 2007 01:54 am (UTC)
aw, what a cute ending. thanks for ending this so excellently : )
a.: MB; hello sunshine;regalish on July 8th, 2007 04:05 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! It's nice to hear the ending didn't disappoint :D

More Jack and Liz fics to come!
She was mean and she had seashells in her hair!: 30r; jl & date?dollsome on July 7th, 2007 01:59 am (UTC)

That was a deeply lovely happily ever after. :D
a.: J/P; your smile;regalish on July 8th, 2007 04:08 pm (UTC)
HEEEEEE! Thank you muchly, babe. I've got such a thing for fluff. Especially if it's weird, insane, Jack/Liz fluff. With BABIES.


"He's having a go at my mother!" Seamus yelled.calamitysxchild on July 7th, 2007 03:20 am (UTC)

Right from the beginning of the chapter I was hoping she'd be pregnant, and then you dropped all the little clues and it was just so very obvious. Silly Jenna. ;) She'll figure it out when Liz starts gaining a few more pounds...she'll remark that maaaaybe Liz should tone down the stress eating, or something, I'm sure. :)

I wanna see the Jack-and-Liz baby! And more from this couple, of course!
a.: AD; it's the final countdown;regalish on July 8th, 2007 04:09 pm (UTC)
Hehehe! Well, I tried to be sneaky about it, but you were on to me! LOL.

I'm glad you liked this ending! And you're probably the third to request a sequel, and I must admit... the idea's pretty appealing, so I'll have to see what comes to me :D

Thanks again for all the kind reviews!
Cross Wordgoodtoast on July 7th, 2007 06:33 am (UTC)
*happy sighs*

What a cute, cute ending. And, ha ha Jenna. It's going to take her forever to figure out. That's alright. I love her anyways <3

Thanks for writing such a delightful story!
a.: J2; he's magic and myth;regalish on July 8th, 2007 04:11 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you so much! It's nice to hear you enjoyed the fluff-filled ending. And yes, Jenna probably won't notice until a few weeks after the baby's born, hehehe! But that's exactly why we love her.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :D
Amandalea724 on July 7th, 2007 12:41 pm (UTC)
Aww! What a wonderful ending to a great story. =D
a.: A/K; i know a guy who's tough but sweet;regalish on July 8th, 2007 04:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it :D

More Jack and Liz fics to come!
majandratoomajandratoo on July 7th, 2007 01:05 pm (UTC)
Awww... SO CUTE! I thought I knew at the beginning, but then they denied it I was was like "psh... wishful thinking!", but THEN- JACK/LIZ BABIES!!
It made me smile SO big.

I cannot deny how much I have enjoyed this fic and reading all the other comments, etc. Thanks for putting so much thought into it and putting up with our endless "SQUEE!" comments, hah.

My Jack/Liz playlist on Itunes will forever be filled with 50's music, and yes- I will probably be picturing them slow dancing, thanks to this story. ;)
a.: KW; take a trip and multiply;regalish on July 8th, 2007 04:16 pm (UTC)
Awww, thank you so so SO much, for absolutely everything! You've been so kind and insightful on every chapter! You are one of my fave reviewers because of that. Each review brought a gigantic smile to my face, and I was helpless to keep writing more and more and more. I intended this fic to be much, much shorter, haha!

Glad to hear you enjoyed the idea of a Jack/Liz baby! I had to throw that little bit of fluff in there ;D

And "putting up" with the SQUEE comments? Heeee, more like eating them up! You guys have been amazing.

You have a Jack/Liz playlist now? Yesss! Hehehe. I've been considering making a fanmix for them (which WILL most definitely include some 50s music, haha).

Thanks again for everything, and there will be more Jack/Liz fics on the way!! ♥
csiAngel: tww fountaincsiangel on July 7th, 2007 01:32 pm (UTC)
Hmm, the evil laughter is back... Mwahahaha! I love that she won't tell Jenna yet. Hee! It probably would end up on ET :-D

A fabulous ending to what has been a wonderful fic. It's been so much fun. I am really going to miss it *sniffle* But, seeing as you'll be writing many more Jack/Liz fics, I'll survive :-D

Also I blame you for the fact that I awoke with a Jack/Liz fic idea in my head and now it won't leave me alone!
a.: J/L; i've got you under my skin;regalish on July 8th, 2007 04:19 pm (UTC)
Evil laughter FTW! BWAHAHAHAHA. I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this fic, and that you got into 30 Rock at all in the first place!!

It's been so much fun for me to write this and get everyone's reactions -- it totally spurred more and more chapters (I only wanted this to be like 10 chapters long, HAHA. Ooops). And yes, there will be many more Jack/Liz fics to come -- I'm actually working on 3 simultaneously right now, hehe, so we'll have to see which one the muse wants me to finish first! :D

OMG you have J/L fic ideas?!?! Well WRITE, woman, WRITE! Heeee. We need more authors for this pairing, and your fics are awesome. Get to it, hehe!!

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feyfan09 on July 7th, 2007 06:11 pm (UTC)
this was so cute! you should definitely continue it! i want to read more of their relationship and see little liz and jack babies! thats soooo cute! i loved it!
a.: JF; turning into dust;regalish on July 8th, 2007 04:46 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you so much! It's so nice to hear you enjoyed this fic, because it's been very fun for me to write.

And I just might have to do a continuation -- there've been a few requests, and the idea sounds pretty appealing, hehe. We'll have to see what the muse comes up with ;)

Thanks again!
stephen@charleneforever.com: 30 rock: jack/liz (& booyah)michellek on July 7th, 2007 10:36 pm (UTC)
Aww, that was great. And I love that Jack still calls her 'Lemon.' Hee. ♥
a.: L; i learned the truth at seventeen;regalish on July 8th, 2007 04:49 pm (UTC)
Aww, thanks muchly my dear! I'm glad you stuck with this fic, hehe. I originally just wanted it to be like 10 chapters! Haha. Oh well. ;D

And I had to have Jack still calling her Lemon. I think he'd call her Lemon even after 30 years of marriage, lol! In my opinion, after maybe the first several episodes, that became almost more of a term of endearment than anything else, hehehe. OR maybe that's just my insane shippery kicking in there. Either way, it's a fun thought!

Thanks again! ♥
Miamiecsi_miamie126 on July 8th, 2007 11:46 am (UTC)
And... It ends.

I love the way you ended it. "start making little Jack-and-Liz babies"? Hillarious.

Yes, I smell a sequel miles away.

Oh, I also blame you. I now have a Jack/Liz fic.
a.: TF; a smile that explodes;regalish on July 8th, 2007 04:52 pm (UTC)
Heee, thank you so much! I'm glad you stuck with this epic fic, LOL.

And you're like the fifth person to mention a sequel! Hahaha. Now it's official. I pretty much have to do one ;D

And it's the second time I've been blamed for the authoring of Jack/Liz fics. Which I'm SO excited about. Hehe, post away! We need more Jack/Liz authors.
(Anonymous) on July 8th, 2007 08:47 pm (UTC)
the frenchgirl think of you as a deity
it's the first time i post a review for fic and yours is truly amazing.you made me discover this fandom as here in France we don't have access to 30 rock. I read all the chapters and all your other fics and you are really incredible.I read yor lattest commernt and I'm so happy that you consider making a sequel.Could you also write a one shot on Liz's pregnancy or just their discovery of it because I think that it would all levels of cuteness. I think that the thing I love the most in this chapter was Jack's "A few more months, Lemon, and your abdomen will be roughly the size of a bowling ball" and his obsession with her stomach and his all thinking whith the pear sparklng juice and.. and everything. Just one last thing to make it perfect A SEQUEL
a.: TF; there's beauty in the breakdown;regalish on July 8th, 2007 09:25 pm (UTC)
Re: the frenchgirl think of you as a deity
Wow, thank you so much! That's so sweet of you to say. I'm absolutely thrilled that you enjoyed this fic (and also, I'm so bummed you don't get to see the magic of 30 Rock! Jack and Liz are truly amazing).

And yes, I am most definitely considering a sequel! And Liz discovering her pregnancy is a rather good idea. I shall have to consider that ;D

Thanks so much, again!
Looks like a fancy prostitute: liz love- bingelingspf1298 on July 8th, 2007 11:58 pm (UTC)

I really, really, really, enjoyed reading this fic even though I'm not a Jack/Liz shipper. (I'm with Tina, it's icky!) But I must confess, I would like to see a sequel with the Jack/Liz baby. :D

a.: J2; he's magic and myth;regalish on July 9th, 2007 01:28 am (UTC)
Awww, thank you so so much! To get a non-Jack/Liz shipper to enjoy a fic that is dripping with Jack/Liz, that is quite the feat! So, I am extremely flattered that you stuck it out through the whole fic! It sincerely means a lot.

And a sequel is definitely in the works :D

Thanks again!
meganp6 on July 10th, 2007 03:27 am (UTC)
This is one of the best fics I have ever read...and i mean EVER!!! OMG this is all new to me, I had never read a 30 rock fic before then I started reading yours and OMG! At the same time I became fascinated AND a Jack/Liz shipper!!LOL I'm speachless!!!! Caroline, I bow to you! Can't wait to start reading another one! :D

a.: J/L; feels just like i'm fallingregalish on July 10th, 2007 06:23 pm (UTC)
Awww, wow! Thank you so much, Meg! I'm so thrilled you enjoyed that fic, and that I piqued your interest in 30 Rock AND Jack/Liz. Because the show is amazing. Seriously. My fic cannot even begin to do it justice. The same goes for the chemistry between Alec Baldwin & Tina Fey. I watched one episode and I was entranced by the prettiness of their weird, crazy relationship, hehehe.

Thanks again! There are lots more Jack/Liz fics on the horizon :)
tasha sveta: Misc - Flowersbitingbedbugz on August 2nd, 2007 04:06 am (UTC)
Yay yay yay I got around to posting! (I had to reread the later chapters because I'm going through a fic withdrawal in every fandom -poke-)

Everything's so spot on (my thought from yesterday that you can do everything comes to mind) that I don't think I even have to comment about it. The way you dropped the subtle hints about her pregnancy was cute. And my love for Jenna and Pete grows everyday.

Can't wait for the sequel =)

And I think Annie for a blue eyed little girl is really cute -nudge nudge-
a.regalish on August 6th, 2007 02:31 pm (UTC)

SO glad you liked the ending. This was by far one of the funnest fics I've ever written, and it's because of reviewers like you. Your enthusiasm for the fic kept up my inspiration for writing more and more chapters, until... look what happened! It became 24 chapters long, when I really only intended to write about ten at the most.

I'll definitely have to start working on that sequel -- the title's pretty much already in place anyway, lol! "Being the Donaghy's" *giggle*

And Annie is a lovely name, isn't it? :D :D :D
Jay Auris: Happynighthawkms on September 6th, 2007 06:34 am (UTC)

This is me, starting to watch 30 Rock, loving the Jack/Liz pairing, and coming on here to find you writing it. This whole thing was bloody BRILLIANT! You've made me stay up too late reading this; for shame! ^__^

a.: J/L; i did not go and shout itregalish on September 9th, 2007 05:25 am (UTC)
HEEEEEE! YAY YOU for getting into 30 Rock! Isn't it amaaaazzziiinnnng?? And OH, the Jack/Liz-ness. You're so lucky to have just gotten into it now, btw! You barely have to wait very long for the new season :D

I'm so excited you liked this fic! (And I'm sorry it's so long, HAHAHA. Otherwise you might've been to bed sooner). I'm hoping the new season will bring back my Jack/Liz inspiration, because they are so weird and dysfunctional, and... oddly perfect for each other, hehe!

I work, I function like i'm a girl.: sallyokelay on March 23rd, 2008 08:56 am (UTC)

what am i going to do now?
it's six am here, and i've spent at least two or three hours reading this (with breaks for music downloads and commenting)

please write more fic. there isn't nearly enough in the world.
a.: mariska; has my name on herregalish on March 27th, 2008 10:43 pm (UTC)
It is over, sadly. I kind of wanted to write this to infinity, LOL, but I figured 24 chapters was enough.

There is a sequel in the works, but I'm not sure when it'll be out. I'm so excited that you found this fic, and that you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! Thanks again! ♥
excellent conversationalist (with food): AlecTinamuic on April 5th, 2008 08:56 am (UTC)
Ok I can't believe I've been missing out on all the awesomeness that is THIS FIC. Anyway, I've just read the whole thing at one go and gosh it was helluva amazing. It's fantastic all around and I know you've posted the sequel so -rushes off to read-

Great job and thanks!
a.: ab/tf; lolregalish on April 12th, 2008 02:22 am (UTC)
Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm so thrilled that you found this fic! First Jack/Liz fic I ever did, lol it got me addicted.

Again, thanks so much! :)
Fi: 30rockjacklizmuldy on April 6th, 2008 02:51 pm (UTC)
I think I may possibly be in love with you!

That was an awesome fic and has successfully allowed me to avoid doing the assignment I have due in 8 hours.

Job well done!! This fic is awesome :-)
a.: jack/liz; followshipregalish on April 12th, 2008 02:23 am (UTC)
Awww, thank you so much! Hehe, I aim to help my readers avoid assignments :D

So glad you liked this! Thanks again. :)
Cec: 30 Rock - Jack & Liz4cecism on May 10th, 2008 03:56 pm (UTC)
So I sat and read all this in one hit until some hideous hour of the night/morning because I just couldn't put the book close my browser down. Evidently it was so late when I finished that my overly-gushy comment wasn't even posted and upon re-reading this, I've only just realised my error and now feel guilty.

Anyway, just wanted to say this may be one of my most favourite fics, um, ever. Seriously, I am so in love with it. And I'm going to go back and read everything you've written thus far (even if I've read it before, back in the day when I didn't consciously let myself ship them) until I float away in some little bubble of joy! (OMG, now I sound like a manic. I swear I'm not.)
The Mighty B: [30Rock] Live-in Lemonrunawayblue on June 8th, 2008 03:13 pm (UTC)
Okay, I read this whole thing through in one sitting on a very uncomfortably hot morning where I would've liked nothing better than to get away from my computer and somewhere nice and cool. But I started reading and could not tear myself away.

It was just excellent in every way. Especially the dialogue. Oh god, the dialogue was excellent, I could hear everything in their voices.

And I really enjoyed Jenna and Pete, which is probably an odd thing to say, but I did.

Beautiful work! Yaaay!